tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-507757166024421008.post8949555310912680624..comments2007-04-27T15:48:08.107-07:00Comments on So The Moon Would Not Be Swallowed: Poem: THE SACRIFICE OF ISAACD.S. Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14495257418306466030noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-507757166024421008.post-44681491755253068962007-04-27T15:48:00.000-07:002007-04-27T15:48:00.000-07:00I have the picture as my desktop background thingy...I have the picture as my desktop background thingy, its cool and kind of creepy at the same time. <BR/> Your poem is pretty good. No punctuation. There is transitions from perspectives, which threw me off a little (only a little). In the beggining it seemed like the poem was about the actual event but then I had the feeling that it was leaning more to the picture by Rembrandt. <BR/> I changed my mind: this poem is good.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com